Following on from my initial ideas of a storyboard/narrative I have now extended the plot of the story so here it goes……
The main idea the narrative is subject A, the boyfriend is supposed to be meeting subject B, the girlfriend at the train station as she is on her way back from university for Christmas. The girlfriend has told the boyfriend that if he is late there will be trouble, as he is renowned for his drunken antics and being late, and also not even turning up to things he should.
But, the night before the boyfriend was invited out for an end of term party and drinks session, so he couldn’t say no but he only planned to go for one or two, but as you know; being a student you end up getting absolutely trolleyed.
Because of the boyfriends crazy antics the previous night he is awoken by a lot of missed calls and text messages from the girlfriend to let him know that she will arriving at the train station in 5 minutes and to be there.
As he is still in bed, and probably still drunk he rushes around to find his phone and get ready, jumping in the shower, missing breakfast completely, having a quick cigarette and on his way to make it to the station in the quickest time possible jumping into the car and speeding towards the train station.
From jumping in the car it will now take around 20 minutes to get there so he is now in a bigger rush, on route to the station, he receives a few text message asking where he is and how long he will be by the girlfriend, after a while you can tell that she is getting a bit agitated that he is not there on time as he is known for being late to everything, as the drink the night before didn’t help.
The journey is the main focus of the project, focusing on my 9 canticles in the car journey to the train station but also showing his panic and worry that he is late once again, and the consequences that will follow once arriving at the station.
From arriving at the train station, he tries to ring the her a few times and keeps getting cut off, he tries to text but this is ended with a text back say that the relationship is over, and that she has left the train station and gone to a friend’s telling him to speak to her when he is ready to be a proper boyfriend.
So the morals of this narrative is to not drink heavily the day before the girlfriend is coming home, the consequences of his actions backfired the day after.
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